Not bad.
Nicely done. 9/10 for that :P. Keep it up.
Not bad.
Nicely done. 9/10 for that :P. Keep it up.
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Hmm.
The drums are too standard and are too quiet.. Also the song is pretty repetitive and too bland. You should change it up a little bit and not keep it on just one level you know what I mean? As far as everything else, those were the only concerns for me.
Tahnk you for your advice and your review. i will work on the drums and change the levels up some.... Thank you again
-Shamrock
Nice
Pretty catchy. Nice job.
Like the drums.
Yeah, I see what you mean by the drums. I like the originality of them. It makes your song unique. As far as the rest, I think it was pretty good. It was a experimental D&B so I wont rate it so roughly, :P. I am curious to hear more songs from you.
4/5
8/10
Heh heh, Hey, I can't talk to much shit about drum patterns or repetition. I think this is song 39 that I've posted here since 2003. Trust me, I'll be the first one to admit that most of my shit sux monkey balls. Actually, I think this is the first song of done that I really like, although, I think I'm going to keep out the intro stuff I put in this in future projects as it really doesn't seem fitting, may just take it out of this and update it, I don't know though.
I can help.
Yes, I have had trouble like this in the past where I uploaded shit and realized it sounded terrible. First, make sure everything matches..The piano and the x=y controller with the other Sytrus you got on there.(I'm assuming you are using Sytrus for the melody).
Second, I do like the fact that the song is constantly changing, and it isn't just one loop used over and over again, which is good. But before you post songs, make sure you ask yourself "If I was a critic, would I like this?" and then my friend, you will know weather to turn this in or not.
Other then those 2 things, I thought this was a good start. Hope to hear some improvement soon :P
Alright.
I guess for ambient stuff this is fine, but there is so much more you could do other then using a couple of Sytrus pads for the whole song. Try smacking a melody on this. Plus, it's not all one constant thing, just a bunch of different sounds put on there.
Nice
Good rap song. This would be a good pump up song!
And jkvjkah, You don't rate how the lyrics are..If they are offensive then don't listen to it. You should know that when you listen to rap, that its going to be offensive to someone.
Really good.
Really like this, I like how it sounds like a rap beat but has guitar, to me it would sound like a rap beat, so I like how you did this. Hope to hear from your other work soon.
hey thanks for the review and yeah you picked up on the rap beat.....i personally hate rap..but i will admit it has seem pretty awesome drum and bass work that can be utilized for rock and metal
Good
Like the beat and the fact you were able to take a song and make something new out of it, which I liked a lot, but the fact that her voice was so high pitched was a turn off for me lol, but keep it up! Good work here.
thanks for the review! yea, some people either love or hate the high pitched voice...i like how "nightcore" and other groups use that...i thought it would be fun to try. thanks for the listen and review!
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